Wow that was original and truly touching. Deliliah sounds like a very well sketched character and her relationship with Zaine is so poignant. I don't know the musicals very well, but the overall oneshot was a pleasure to read :) well done.

HEY D

I really like your story! (:

Delilah is a really nice character and theres a lot you can do with her.

I loved it as a ONE SHOT but have you thought of actually having like a short story with 4-5 chapters? 'Cause that would be great! :D

And thanks so much for the review and adding me to your favorite story and author list. I'm really honored! (:

Keep reading and reviewing and your welcome to share any advice you have on my writing.

If you need anything else just PM me. (:

Keep writing

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