|Reviews for Boa Constrictor|
| Alazar-Ramir chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Ok, I really liked this one.
The fact that the opening two stanzas I felt were quite fast paced really set the mood for it, and then, quite magnificently, you cut the pace with the next line.
It made me picture the constriction with the feel of sudden release.
The only thing I am uncertain of is the last line. For some reason, I more expected the boa constrictor to control your heart rather than your mind.