Reviews for Knight of Pentacles
darkershadeofpale chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Ooh, this is cool. I love the imagery and just the ...vibe that it has. It's different to your other poetry, though. But still really, really good.

I just like how it kind of ties itself back to mythology but not really, and then the Medusa verse - just the way you say things, it's terribly creepy in a wonderful way.

The only part I didn't like:

"His voice is that of a wretched mina bird"

Hardly because it's bad, just because it doesn't really fit with the rest of the imagery/tone you have going, (I think, anyway) even though the next line flows really well, and I know what those birds sound like, and it makes sense within the poem itself.

But then, I probably have no idea what I'm on about.

. darker shade of pale