Reviews for Wishful Thinking
heyitsstupidme chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I think you've said a lot with those few words and I like that.
SargentLooneyPencil chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
So little words. And yet, it has portrayed the emotion of a person who is hoping for something or someone they cant have.. Great JoB!
SomeRandomScribbles chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Great piece! I love the simplicity and emotion, and how much meaning you pack into so few words.
YasuRan chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Quite a strong opening stanza. But you seemed to dwindle midway through the poem as it seemed a bit abrupt. Some more verses would have worked or alternatively, more compelling wording.