Reviews for Desperate
Onearmwonder21 chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
wow this is pretty interesting read. This one made me a bit sad, but I can relate. P.s. thanks for reviewing one of my works be sure to read more of yours as well soon.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Awww, you've described the situation very well. Good job overall! Write on!

~Anna~ _
thrivingivory852 chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
i really liked this one. The first thing i noticed about this was how realistic and relatable it was. Then, i noticed how this was written; great detail, interesting plot, and good choice of words. Honestly, i love your work! Keep it up :)