Reviews for Blind |
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![]() ![]() I can tell where your going with this and don't take Offence because I adore the love/hate cliche, but sweetie if your updates keep on being this slow and out of desperation you try to rush the story won't be as developed as it needs to be to be good... U think you should finish writing the story before u post it... If you absolutely HAVE to make people wait (like a little devil) then I suggest posting a chapter a week at least this way people know that the story is completed so they won't be abandoned m |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stalker/Fan didn't reply to your PM because she knew she'd be reviewing soon. Stalker/Fan is now going to talk in third person for no more reason than it's fun. Stalker/Fan loves how this story is going. It's amazing and beautifully written, and Stalker/Fan says you should update soon. Then Stalker/Fan will be very happy. And Stalker/Fan returns your awesome virtual hug. ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It definitely is weird how nice Noah is. As for Otelli, I know much it sucks being in a new and unfamiliar place. But, she really has good people to look after her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() it seems like a nice story... D... update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Picturing the look that would be on Otelli's face at the end of the chapter...hehe. Update soon ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, she just cant get away from him, huh? Please don't leave it at that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! I really liked the ending LOL XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() update more please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like so far. Noah seems like a nice guy but definitely kind of annoying... This chapter wasn't boring. The conversation with her friends was kind of funny(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice long chapter and no it wasn't boring. i like the fact that otelli doesn't feel like she fits in straightaway, it makes it seem more realistic. aww the ending was cute. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far! Update soon! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Love it soo much! I wish I had a high school romance but NO mine sucks!But anyways I realy like the story and I know it sounds weird but I am officaily in love with the fact that he is a fictionl charactor! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() update please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far, can't wait till next update so update soon!:) |