Reviews for Waiting
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
That was fantastic! I think, for me, that the poem says the girl is lost and is waiting for someone, who has died maybe, to come and find her. It sounds as if she's shocked! I loved that poem! :D

Thank you for your kind reviews on my story...I love your work

Keep writing :)
SmooGirl chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Oooh, very mysterious there, sweetie. I loved it! :D xx
DiamondWolf14 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Nice rhymeing and rhythm. The poem itself creates a nice effect. Good work!