Reviews for Darkness
My.Writing.Is.My.Amulet chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Great poem, with a chilling end!
Sketch me if you can chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
This is also a Poem of yours, that I like.
Because I'm into dark writing.
Really well written, this one.
( Do you know the song "In all my dreams I drown" from " The Devil's Carnival" ? I had to think of it as I read this).
UzumakiMatsurika chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Wow. A very interesting poem. It really attacks to the core.

It actually reminds me of a good suspence movie, if I might add.

I liked how you used the words in such context. It had me. I seriously

Have to say it is good. Great! Absoutlely wonderful! Ironic actually saying

Something is wonderful when the title is other than that. But no matter

No matter, just showing my appreciation :D
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
You really are on the writing up and up. Now this is a dark poem that I can really sink my teeth (metaphorically speaking of course) into. The darkness and despair emanates from each line and indicates a lot of hurt, some fear and dismay. The way that you describe the constricting feeling around your throat is a good line and this poem also has a gentle rhyming scheme which I've not noticed in some of your other works. There are so many nuances in this poem that the ideas being carried across is up to various interpretations. I think it will fall down to the discernablility of the reader to decide what is happening. For those that read only superficially this poem wouldn't make much sense. Nicely done!
thrivingivory852 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
Wow...This was really good! :) Really emotional and full of detail. Great job, as usual
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
I like this, a well written piece. Always be positive and write on!

~Anna~ _