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![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely beginning to a very interesting story. I like the way it starts and develops slowly, before the kiss, then explodes. :-) Maggie M. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg this is like the greatest little one-shot ever! I love it so much hah |
![]() ![]() I love it (: |
![]() ![]() really cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :) goood one |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this One-shot :) like really reeeaaallly like this one-shot :) its pity it's only a *one* shot instead of a couple more shots ;) hehe hint hint |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol! Lolololol! Their letters are hilarious! Nice job D |
![]() ![]() Nice! Write more :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, WOW! Detention? Romantic! Wow, this is so... just WOW! Really, WOW! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really cute! Nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Detention! How romantic. Haha Great one shot . (: |
![]() ![]() good story! very cute ending! can't wait to read more of your stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was hilarious. The ending was cute, and I love writing notes ;D I was wondering why you switched her note writing from just italic to italic and underlined. I think you should've stuck with just the italic since it looks like a bunch of titles in the story with the underlining. :) I really liked the story though. You could continue it if you wanted to turn it into a comedy/romance but I like it as a OneShot as well. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well it seemed rather cliche and wasn't that developed. But I must admit, it was really cute and it made me smile. Good job. Keep writing. |