I like it!

It could be the start of a pretty decent story. I find myself longing for some kind of conclusion or something, the ending is almost too open, and I'd be happy to read it if you chose to write more.

I like your vision of the angels too, and their contrast with the black clothes and white wings.

- Stacie.

I think you should give up on this being one shot and what not. This has the beginnings of a great story.

I must be a weird person because I love this story! It's sweet and fluffy but gives you the chills at the same time.

It's romantic, she's down to earth and human, he's dazzling (though not in the Edward Cullen way) and polite. This story is a sweet oneshot that could not be described as cheesy, as you so eloquently brand your other work. The story in itself reminds me of the relationship between two people in my life. Excellent work, I can't stop reading it over and over. There truly is a beauty in your writing. No criticism. Maybe next time. ;)

Aww this is so sweet! I really enjoyed this, it's really good :) very well written as well. I wish this wasn't just a one shot though, I think this could have a really interesting plot

Nice, just quite sweet and genius.

JM