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Oh man, this looks like it's going to be such a great story! I like the set-up and the fact that you have such a cool cast of characters makes it seem like it's going to really go somewhere. I hope that you continue with this! It's a great idea!

This idea was so original that I couldn't really pass it up. I'm usually into yaoi, but I don't mind the occasional hetero if it's not all cliche' or anything. So, I hope that this story won't be a typical princess being saved by her knight and falling in love story. Then again, it's by you and your works are really out of the box.

This looks promising. I'd love it if you updated this, because so far it's one of my favorites.

I await your next chapter. I can't say much that everyone else hasn't said.

This looks really interesting so far. I like your premise and the cast of characters you have. I hope that you end up writing on this some more.

This is my favorite of your progressing works. I love your cast and how you've set everything up. Please continue this. I'd love to see more of it.

I have heard a lot about this one. I'm actually kind of sad that it only has a prologue. I think the idea is original and the characters seem so unique and interesting. I hope you continue it some day, this is also something I will stalk.

This sounds exciting. I can't wait for the update. Good detail, helluva lot better grammar than you can say about a lot of writers up here. All in all a perfect ten.

This is really good so far. I like your idea. It's really original.

This one looks interesting. I'm sort of sad that you only have one chapter on it. I really want to know what happens, and I hope and ask that you continue to update it, please?

Oh, this story looks so cool! I'm sure if you updated it would be as popular as your other ones! Please update!

My friend read this and said she loved it, so it was suggested to me. So far, it's really awesome. You got well over 10 reviews, so please update it! I want to know what happens next! I also really like the prologue and your characters sound amazing!

This looks really, really good. So far, I'm interested in all of these characters. I want to know what happens next so I hope that you continue this beautiful idea.

This was very good. I like the characters you described and I hope you write more. I look forward to new chapters in the future.