Reviews for The Memory Of A Kiss
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
I love the last line and the line about the taste of denial. Very powerful. The format of the poem is quite beautiful, too.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Dark. I love it! Such amazing word useage Wish I had that lol. Great poem. Adding to C2 if you don't mind!

XxXKristie MarieXxX
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I really liked the piece. Thy rhyming was good, not forced and pretty subtle, especially in the first stanza.

I really loved the first stanza. I thought those first two lines were a great description and I loved how you went from a real smell of vanilla to an abstract taste of denial.

The rest of the piece is great too. Beautiful word choices and descriptions. Great job.

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