Reviews for Life
vague shadow chapter 2 . 5/23/2011
I really liked this continuation of the first poem.

Where the first one was filled with urgency and uncertainty, this one is filled with resignation and sadness. The person speaking understands that goodbyes have to come sometime, but that just the way of things.

I liked the last two lines too. It gave a sense of peace and hope, with the idea that death isn't something necessarily permanent, but something more like sleep.

Great job! You did wonderful on this. :)

vague shadow chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Nice job. :)

There was definitely a feeling of urgency and uncertainty in this chapter. I enjoyed it.