|Reviews for bleed like me|
| october lies chapter 2 . 5/27/2011
the lyrics and prose fit together so well. i love the very end how she saunters out, smiling; a complete change from the beginning, and the moment before walking through the door.
| october lies chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
i've ached for something of this nature to read all my life - you are now fulfilling it. you string words together so perfectly and paint images that cannot be forgotten or mistaken or misunderstood. never, in any way, could your writing be considered plain or forced. your word choice is so fitting for the tone.
i adore "she felt the sharp little bones rejecting the boxer shorts she wore."