Reviews for Hopefully Homeless
Just a little mi chapter 11 . 1/19/2013
So. You've not updated, I see. Need I remind you you've already written the next chapter?
I'm apologizing now if I sound rude, but if you're going to leave anyone with a cliff hanger like that for well over a year, you don't need to let them know that the proceeding chapter is already done... Really. I was here when you wrote the very first chapter for this story, and seeing it go abandoned and unfinished is a bit depressing if I do say so myself. Here's to hoping I can convince you to at least post that last chapter, if nothing else
Just a Little Miss
RatheRa chapter 11 . 12/24/2011
The idea is seriously awesome. I hope one of the guys finds out her real gender soon. XD
D chapter 11 . 12/24/2011
I love this story. Update soon!
mylittlePRINCESS chapter 11 . 9/12/2011
yay you'r back! update please.
R.P. Ann chapter 11 . 9/11/2011
Hi so yeah, I don't have much time. I've got to go to sleep. It was awesome. Next chappie ASAP please. I loved it. I love Saul... Jared is kinda getting to my good side haha. Well, you're awesome. Next chappie ASAP! LOVE THIS STORY.
Pream chapter 11 . 9/11/2011
I like your story :) Sam and Jared are very sly...

I sometimes see your typos and I would see sentences like, "he ran after my."

when it's supposed to be "he ran after me." I hope that helps :)
JustPeachy333 chapter 11 . 9/10/2011
Love this story! please continue to update! Great job!


silverspigot chapter 11 . 9/10/2011
I like it. But I wonder when the guys will realize that Ror's not a boy. Also, I was thinking about when Sam and Fae were discussing plans; did Fae tell him that Rory is actually a girl?
noveltybee chapter 11 . 9/10/2011
Sam and Fae are just too loveable. I wonder if she told im Rory's really girl? Hmm..

Saul is my favorite. I would love for Rory to end up with him.

His character is just so interesting.

I hate to love Jared. His plan was..interesting. Lol & the cliffhanger! Grr. What does he mean by familiar? Does he tie in with something from Rory's past that contributed to er not liking to be touched? Or..?

Okay, I don't tink I make sense. Haha. Can't wait for Chapter Twelve!
Kelly70702 chapter 11 . 9/10/2011
I didn't see a single mistake. i don't really give a damn about grammatical and punctuation mistales anyways. an updates an update- and im glaaaad u diiid finaly update~ i was begining to worry. i cannot begin to describe how many stories that were totally awesome and great, liiike this one, that were abandoned T-T

I like stuff like this, where a girl poses as a guy, and the guys are really being too much of twits to realize it. eeeven if their horomones do XD
Just A Little Miss chapter 11 . 9/10/2011
No mistakes, nothin' to worry 'bout :)

I love this story, so much, I truly am addicted.

Update soon, these shorter chapters are driving me crazy! Please? I'll give you a hug! AND cookies-promise!

mylittlePRINCESS chapter 10 . 8/21/2011
interesting story! love it update more please
Carlotta Lynn chapter 10 . 8/15/2011
I like this! I want more! Can't wait to see what happens next!
xXFutureRulerOfTheWorldXx chapter 10 . 8/13/2011
R.P. Ann chapter 10 . 8/13/2011
Well, even if you don't like it... I do. LOL. It's just so hilarious. I loved this chapter, so funny. I love Saul... I think I already told you that XD LOl... Jared... he's kinda gettin' to my bright side lol XD You're awesome. I loved this chapter, especially the end. I actually laughed. Well, next chappie ASAP :3 it was amazing. You're good, really good. Love your story :3
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