|Reviews for Hopefully Homeless|
| Lola chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
Getting to the good part, huh? Very nice, I'll wait for your updates.
| cnb chapter 2 . 5/24/2011
| TeeReeses24 chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
First off, the title's incredibly creative. I like how you started with a bit of background information, but not enough for it to bore everyone to death. I mean.. who wants to read biographies of other people? Definitely not a lot of people.
Your imagery is amazing also. Perfect grammar and strong adjectives that conjure up clear pictures. I'm already fascinated with the story plot. It's different, in a good way. Not too much dialogue either, so to me, this story is bordering on perfection. And it's only chapter 1.. imagine that.
Keep it up :) This is suchhh a good story. More than good enough to wait, since no one likes waiting for updating chapters, hmm?
| Lola chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Very interesting. The summary seems promising. I'll keep on eye on this one.
| Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
I look forward to see how the story comes together.