Reviews for Daydreams
C. Holywell-Black chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
This is unbelievably clever, and although disturbing, perfectly accurate. It is seen through the mind of someone who denies their thoughts as being wrong. They condone their opinion because they think this is exactly how everyone else should think.

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RedX9 chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
you did the role well. How you describe the little girls where fascinating. And how you can analyse that character well shows how much deep understandings you have to these type of people (as mentioned in your profile that you are studying mental health). As this is a descrpitive piece, I could just say that it was well done love descriptive pieces.

never hate your characters everyone of them has a unique personality. In fact I kinda like him. I mean he has this sexual desire with girls but he restrains that thought and controls himself. no one is perfect