|Reviews for Still Suffering|
| Foxglove xxx chapter 22 . 10/20/2011
Hey, It's author of 'nothingness' told you i would be reading your story. :) Is this the one you meant? I find it so intense and my eyes watered a few times. I love Steven :) i think the way you wrote it, especially Ryan's struggle back to normality is incredible :) I loved the attention to detail like the sofa and floors and pictures :) Look forward to reading your next chappie :) Dominic better get caught!
| cratermaker chapter 22 . 10/19/2011
Oh my god... That idea is so effed up, I swear... -closes eyes tightly, ashamed of the bubbling feeling inside of how good a story it would make-
Anywho, damn. It's hilarious that I submitted this right before you updated, lol. -chuckles disbelievingly- But now I have to wait for a super long time... Blaaaah... -pouts-
And I am really digging how the story is developing. REALLY digging it. And I'm pleased that I get a spoiler. Well, everyone can read it, but it was written for ME. -feels very special and kind of smug- I look intently forward to your next update.
| jessicas favorite stories chapter 22 . 10/19/2011
perfect speed update XD yaaaaaay. lets hope enxt will be the same? anyways i was expecting dominic to jump out grab him & take off 0_0
| CharlieTehUnicron chapter 22 . 10/19/2011
No, dude. NO. Because that would mean that THIS story will have an unhappy ending, and I HATE unhappy endings. They make me feel incomplete.
Awesome chapter dudette. You write amazingly. I'm jealous.
| ConcreteAngel14 chapter 22 . 10/18/2011
This is pretty sivk and twisted cral but Im still addicted to it. I absolutly look forwarrd to your updates, and you should publish this as a book when your done. Many people will love it. I know its so twisted for Ryan to be like this but I love it and Dusk is so cute.
| cratermaker chapter 21 . 10/18/2011
HOSHIT! HODAMN! HOSHIT! XC OH DEAR! OH NO! -flails frantically before flinging my arms up to cover my face- AAHH! I KNOW I DON'T WANT HIM TO GO BACK BUT IT WOULD BE SUCH A GOOD PLOT TWIST, BOOHOOHOO... ;; You're sending him back soon, I know it, and I don't blame you one bit for it... HOWEVER. I still can't wait to learn more about the new character, and I look intently forward to your next update. Please be speedy; I need something to look forward to, something to break up the stress of college.
| Ivy Climbroe chapter 21 . 10/17/2011
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG !DON'T DO IT, I BEG OF YOU! DON'T DON"T DON'T! I CAN JUST SEE IT, HE WILL CAPTURE HIM AND THEN IT WILL ALL JUST BE TERRIBLE! DON'T PUT YOUR READERS THROUGH THAT HORRID PAIIIIIN! GOD I SWEAR, I WILL PERSONALLY GET THIS PUBLISHED FOR YOU AND THEN EVERYONE CAN READ THIS STORY, AND THIS CHAPTER AND BEG FOR RYAN NOT TO GET RECAPTURED BY DOMINIC! JEEZ I'M FREAKING OUT AND THIS IS JUST A STORY! THIS IS BETTER THAN TWILIGHT. (IM ACTUALLY NOT THAT BIG A FAN OF TWILIGHT, BUT IT MADE LIKE A NATIONAL CRISIS CUZ IT WAS SO GOOD SO TAKE IT AS A COMPLIMENT!) GOD I WISH I HAD YOUR TALENT!
| WeFallForever chapter 21 . 10/17/2011
It really did just get serious! Dominic can't get him-everything is supposed to work out now. Ugh, update soon!
| Pancakegirl chapter 21 . 10/17/2011
OMGEEEE! AHHHHHHH! XD NOOOOOOOO NOT DOMINIC! Well it was what I was asking for wasn't it...? Yeah it was.. I'm a terrible person for wishing torture on poor Ryan. One thing I need to tell you though and actually laughed at and I'm sorry but you said "I ignored the amazed stairs" lol XD I think you meant Stares. It's in the beginning of the story if you want to fix it. I first thought "Wow Stairs are amazed" haha. Sorry for laughing but yeah you might want to fix that. Other than that this chapter got my pulse racing. I can't believe Dominic the sicko is back already! NOOOOOO! This is turning into a long review but whatever. Yeah. I'm bery dedicated and I will most likely read your newest story out. It looks interesting. Anyway! Keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter already! XD
| jessicas favorite stories chapter 21 . 10/17/2011
0_0 dominic 0_0 dont leave us hanging to long plzzzzzz
| Vladimirlen chapter 21 . 10/17/2011
I wish next time Ryan sees Dominic, he'll punch him in the face. Heck! I want to punch Dominic. I hate that guy. I just wish that Ryan tuffens up a bit now that he's older.
| CharlieTehUnicron chapter 21 . 10/17/2011
You ARE an evil creation. The FRUSTRATION! SCREAM! I shall go punch a pillow or something.
| cratermaker chapter 20 . 10/8/2011
For heaven's sake, Shady, put Max down...
Anyway, wisdom tooth surgery went great; it's been a week, and I've only got some minor pain at this point. Don't be too scared about getting your wisdom teeth out; just do everything that they tell you and be really careful and everything will be fine.
Anywho. Who is this new character, I wonder?
I wanna know...
| Ivy Climbroe chapter 20 . 10/5/2011
Well, no matter what ben says, I thought this chapter was brilliant! I like the kid who helped out Ryan, that was so cool! I also can't wait for the next chapter! Man I swear, if this wasn't already based on a movie it would be published. Also, PLEASE don't make him go back to Dominic! GOD hasn't he suffered enough? Well, I suppose it is titled "Still Suffering" lol. Oh! The part where the first camera clicks, I was betting on my life it was a Dominic with a gun behind Ryans head. SO WAY TO GO, I'M DEAD NOW! jk sorry, I'm a little hyper. Alright I'm going to stop writing now, BUT DON'T STOP!LUV IT!
| CharlieTehUnicron chapter 20 . 10/5/2011
You did? I didn't notice.
Okay, I did notice, but I didn't make a big deal out of it or anything. ;)
Ooh, do I sense some slash coming up?
...Please let there be slash coming up.
I think it'll just make the story ten times more exciting. Especially if Dominic finds out and gets all possessive and then something BIG happens at the Dominc-gets-Ryan-back scene. That would be tres epical. XD
This story is seriouisly top-notch. I love it. And you're writing is also totally awesome. (: