Reviews for Shapeshifter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This poem has an intriguing message; I like the feeling you've put into it. However, with a structure like this you may want to try making each line the same number of beats. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's pretty cool... i don't get it, but it still SOUNDS cool... _;; |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. But I notice that the title and your email are the same, and wonder if there is a strong metaphor or personality associated with "shapeshifter" in your eyes. Beyond that, very good use of repetition and rhythm. Great feet-sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good stuff! There are so many good poets on this site if i added all the poems i like to my favourites there'd be hundreds! This is about feeling inadequate in love right? Even if it isn't thats how I interpret it.. Very descriptive and the dark stuff adds to the feeling of sadness and frustration.. |