Reviews for A Mother's Doll
Reel Wander chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
interesting piece

nice way of putting it together
non.graceful chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
there was no rhythm within the poem. I know there doesn't always have to be one but it would have been better if you had.

However, I did enjoy the timeline the story have- how the relationship changed throughout the whole Poem.

Nice job.