|Reviews for The Change|
| kjforce chapter 4 . 9/7/2011
HYSTERICAL...It's me again...I could imagine being married to you would be like living in a Robin Williams movie...funny stuff, you keep your wrinting real..I like that..I get my writing subject from family,friends,society and life in general..kudos again..sorry for three e-mails in one day..I had a blast reading from a man's point of view..also the ten year old..again.. weedbychoice
| Wanderling chapter 4 . 6/6/2011
wow! this is a surprising ending! i never expected it, but it makes a lot of sense. is this from personal experience?
| LM4E chapter 4 . 5/29/2011
HAHA this was hilarious! The whole thing. And I definitely thought that it was going to be a werewolf thing, that's why I came back to read the rest and see what the change might be in case I was wrong, which I was. And btw the imagery in the first chapter was really good. I could hardly breathe reading it. Anyway, you should keep writing comedies. This was refreshing
| Agnol chapter 2 . 5/27/2011
I spent the entire time i read this wondering exactly what was going on, and even for a story this short, that's not a good sign. I could see this going somewhere, but for that to happen, you'd have to tighten it up a bit and make the point more readily available.
| Wanderling chapter 2 . 5/26/2011
hmm... change not done yet... i still dont get what happened. will there be more chapters?
| Wanderling chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
is he changing to a werewolf? this is a really nice start either way. keep writing!