|Reviews for Cloud|
| ChildrenStoriesRule chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Aww, how cute! Those are the moments that make life worth it lol. Now if only we could make them last longer.
Nice little poem. Liked it very much
| Cehsja chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
I really love the imagery in this poem :)
| Jenny Sue chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
This is a lovely poem. I love how you've bookended it with similar lines, very nicely done.
| skersey chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
This is beautiful, because of the second stanza. It's just so positive. The end of the same stanza was a bit of a downer though, because you caught up with the cloud. My heart sank :/ I really started feeling for the speaker here. If this was your intention, it really worked, and it makes your poem really effective :)