Reviews for Cloud
ChildrenStoriesRule chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Aww, how cute! Those are the moments that make life worth it lol. Now if only we could make them last longer.

Nice little poem. Liked it very much
Cehsja chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
I really love the imagery in this poem :)
Jenny Sue chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
This is a lovely poem. I love how you've bookended it with similar lines, very nicely done.
skersey chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
This is beautiful, because of the second stanza. It's just so positive. The end of the same stanza was a bit of a downer though, because you caught up with the cloud. My heart sank :/ I really started feeling for the speaker here. If this was your intention, it really worked, and it makes your poem really effective :)