Reviews for A Collection of Dark Poems
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
So sad... really made me think about similarities between this and myself - I particularly relate to your last piece. Poetically speaking, however, my favourite piece was definitely A Sonnet about Death. I like its... its rigidity and yet how free it is. Rhyme scheme is a bit dodgy at points but that can be overlooked because it's awesome stuff, it really is :) I also like The Only Way. Keep up the good work, this is amazing stuff :)
No Longer Active Here chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
I'm an avid poetry fan, so I really liked this. The first one seems to be inspired by Edgar Allan Poe (I love him!), yet in it's own way original so it has to be my favorite. :) Are you going to write more? Please do!
lymli chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
I like the last one poem, it's so tue, people always hidin in lies.
Homura Kitsune chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
The very first poem I think is the best of this collection. I would suggest you write more sonnets because that one was lovely.

"Make amends in everything you do

Whatever's coming, it's coming for you"

Easily the best line in all the poems here. Keep writing!