|Reviews for Jazz Band|
| Alkali.Alias chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Really felt the regret in this, and then the hint of hope at the end. It was great because it made me want to know more about the story behing these words.
| YasuRan chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
I like the overall tone and atmosphere of the piece's setting. As I read, it becomes more and more reminiscent of the lonesome ballads the jazz genre is noted for. The air of mystery is nicely brought out through the brackets, like the narrator reveals something intimate that has been hidden all this time. In this case, it's her regret. Good job in this regard. This is what really brought the piece to life, along with some pretty accurate descriptions of smoky bar-like atmosphere.
A spelling mistake, if I may point out: 'we'd look at the stars and delcare it' I think you meant 'declare' instead?
| her brown eyes chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Wow. This is... nothing less than perfect.
| lymli chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
makes me think bout a prom where nothing hapened, XD but the end is kinda sweet