I liked this. It was powerful, and your friend probably went through a lot. Now, I'm not going to generalise since this is obviously talking about a very specific event I have no idea about, but fakes aren't always unnecessary. I know one or two with interesting reasons. So yeah. I hope your friend gets through this alright :/

i can think of a few people who 'you' might refer too ... great poem :)

love it.

even though i'm sure it's based off something personal, it's something anyone who's been in a situation like that could relate to. i know i can. so, i'm happy that you wrote it, that you were able to convey those angry feelings that some people struggle with and sometimes never get to say to the bitches who cause them.

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JB

this is totally my family, it's so sad, people can't be who they're.

cool piece.