Reviews for Imagine Letting Go
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
So sad... you really get a sense of the emotions in the poem because of the words you've used. I love the imagery and the similes used - I also loved the structure. I think it would have been nice if there was a structured rhyme scheme (that's just me being picky :P) but I honestly think this is awesome. Well done :)
jack0of0spades chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
I like it! Honestly, I think it could do without the explanation at the beginning though. For me at least, it made the imagery too simple to know before reading it what you had in mind. It is always good to know what the author had in mind, but I think the reader should also be able to find their own meaning in the work. To me, that is what makes the difference between good and great writing. This is already great. Maybe if you put the explanation at the end? I think it would give it the space this poem needs to really shine like it deserves to.
Youknowyoulovemee chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
i like it:)