Reviews for Ask
Poisoned Twinkles chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
It's short, but the message is deep and lovely. The setting you've used fits perfectly. I just thought that the enjambment of the second like could have been avoided, since it seems so lonely, but that's just me :P
YasuRan chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
I really liked this one. The imagery is vividly portrayed through simple verses. The whole scene and its implications are realized through this simplicity, without being fraught with too much detail. It's striking in its clarity and brevity. The latter especially adds that touch of doom, as if there's no way out for the protagonist. Excellent stuff.
DianaLapin chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
I enjoyed this poem. The description is wonderful, especially "like a rusty blade." I want to note that you have without twice written in the penultimate stanza, but other than that its a wonderful example of free verse