Reviews for Breaths
singer22498 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
I really like this poem a lot. It really gives you the emotional feeling that the girl (im asuming) is feeling about the relationship. How the guy (asuming) is very dangerous, intoxicating and bad for her, but she still has to be with him.

I do think that the flow could be improved though. A few of the lines dont seem to work when it goes to the next at certain spots. So you should probably look over it and see if you want to improve it.

Overall, great job.