Reviews for Teenage Mom
noriepie chapter 4 . 5/30/2011

I'm not laughing about the fact that they got played by the wicked witch of the west. Actually, that was pretty funny, I can see the mom and Alex's resemblance -especially he contracts. I half expected the mom to say "idiot" because he didnt read the details, then i reqlized she was more vicious by giving him no choice. Wow your on fire with this updating thing, I love it.

Oh yes, I was laughing my freaking head off on your reply message. I wonder which one of the guys that's head over heels in love with your friend will have the guts to tell her first. She must be special.:). Andrea and Alexander with baby Andrew! What the hell, Devin's (i love chuck) reaction is totally unjustifiable. Even a monkey have more defense on their mate, and he just asked her out. Maybe he didn't know it was drea getting mouth raped? By the way, this chapter was funny, and I'm so checking out those Korean shows mentioned. I've been deprived of them since Uni.
sammie chapter 2 . 5/29/2011
I love this story so far and your chapter lenghts are good, don't shorten them. keep updating!
noriepie chapter 3 . 5/29/2011
What! Oh my daze poor drea! What the hell I feel sorry for devin, he did not need to find drea kissing Alex! Alex has been a jerk all along and is now ruining the only friendship that she had in school. He sucks!

So right now I want devin and drea...bithe their names start with D!

But I would be Alex and Drea all along.

I just...Hope things work out now. Maybe cuz right now Dev seems like such a sweet perfect guy it sucks to see stupid Alex steal Drea.
noriepie chapter 2 . 5/29/2011
Totally played her! She got played! Hell how does a mart girl like her that can amass a fortune via sto k market in a year not realize her roommate was a lesbian and told everyone she was too and then got played by a jerk friend! Haha she's too much. What I don't understand is why Alex is so mad at her? He's asking her for a favor but being a total butthead about it. Why?
predict.this chapter 3 . 5/29/2011
Love, love, love, love, love! I am OFFICIALLY in love with this story. I love the narration style; it's humorous and conversational and friendly. I really like Drea!

I just think that Alex and Devin seem to be very stereotypical, cardboard cut-out characters at the moment. I hope that as the story moves on, we'll get to know about about them and their idiosyncrasies.

And maybe you can write more about Andrew? He seems kinda under-described for such an important part of the story!

Anyway, can't wait to read more! (:
grayandme4ever chapter 3 . 5/29/2011
there's going to be romance between drea and alex right? because otherwise, i'm totally pissed at him because alex just ruined drea's relationship with a guy who doesn't care that she's a 'teenage mom,' who was always there by her side. on the other hand, i am hoping for some kind of relationship between drea and alex to bloom. despite his personality, he seem like a nice guy. anyways, great job, i can't wait to read the next chapter :D
K.C Lanton chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
This story is awesome! I actually love they way her thoughts are all jumbled together! Great work and keep your chapter lengths the way they are.
grayandme4ever chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
yay, an update. that was a great chapter. i don't like alex yet, but i have to admit, picturing drea and baby andrew together is really cute. great job, can't wait to read more :D
Kanari Toneriko chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Lol. :D
RiddlesAreMystery chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
ahahaha this was awesome and funny please write more **
grayandme4ever chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
this seems like an interesting story. i would like to read more of it. keep up the great work :D
noriepie chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
I love how this story is soo out of the blue :) lol but I want to believe in it. He's not gonna leave her like that is he?

Although I appreciate the drama, first impression of Alex is that he's so inconsiderate dumping a baby in the middle of the school hall. But...I love the drama haha. X
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