Reviews for The Devil's Son in Law
BroadwayBaby97 chapter 5 . 6/23/2011
I like this story so far! I really like the fact that Jon is always so cocky, it makes me laugh. Update soon! :)
H.S. Myth chapter 2 . 5/31/2011
I really, really like the first chapter of this story. I liked putting together the pieces of who Jonathan was and what was going on and I thought the details about his phone call and how he returned were really unique and interesting.

The second chapter was good during the parts that were in the moment, taking place in hell, but the background information felt rushed and confusing. Though it seemed like one of the main purposes of the chapter was to explain what his task is and how he came to be there, I didn't really understand it.

I like your ideas a lot and I will be watching, hope to learn more in the future.