Reviews for Goodbye
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
I feel sorry for David, you seem like a great person. He missed out.
weareyourworstmightmare chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
u no, this poem is EXACTLY how it all happens. Love, i mean.

im not one to get emotional but it seems to me tlk 2 u l8terthat this is one topic i can relate and still feel another wave of pain isn't here and she may not shrae my same view on the subject but u should no im not saying i understand because ev everyones pain is there own but i can relate. well im goin 2 eat so tlk 2 u l8ter, if i get around 2 it.

-whisper
ThatLonelyOne chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Exceptional. Truly exceptional. Your skills are writing are increasing, but in my eyes, this isn't just skill. It's from the heart. I don't know if you had to think hard while you wrote this, or if it just slipped out of your mind and onto the keys, but it was worth it. This, i swear, is your best one yet. It tells a story, while being just a poem, but the best one I have every read. Amazing.

Keep up this beautiful work. I hope everything gets better for you, Zoe, amazing.