Reviews for The Indian
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
I like it. It's so sad. There some Native Americans who wish that they could still live the way they did before settlers arrived. I read that you didn't want to put this in gerenal, why don't you place it in Historical?
sunscribe chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
I enjoyed this story more than the other. You do a nice job of intertwining the past and present. The only suggestion that came to mind for changes might be a more terse/brief prose: for example, making the paragraph that describes her typing the legends and histories more concise to add power possibly-just a possible suggestion. Definitely enjoyed!