Reviews for Whirlwind of Pleasure
Kyuuketsuki Fangirl chapter 24 . 12/2/2011
Another great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!
PerfectChaos859 chapter 24 . 12/2/2011
I loved this chapter. She finally admitted her love for him! :-) I don't want Nicholas to die though!
Guest chapter 24 . 11/30/2011
loving this story very much :)
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 24 . 11/30/2011
depressing end! i'm guessing (at least hoping a lot) that even if nicholas goes through with the sacrifice he'll live, either itll be like they need the dedication of it or somehow he'll survive it
Kassandra Duric chapter 24 . 11/30/2011
OH no! He can't! Not now! That wouldn't be fair! Give her a minute with Eremet(sp)! He'll tell her what she truely needs to do to get rid of the curse!
Midnight113 chapter 24 . 11/29/2011
Aw, she loves him! I'm so happy for them and I'm glad she was reunited with Ermete... great to see Estraya and Kieron again. ;) Although, I'm a little upset about the situation with Avalon's sanctuary. I don't want anything to happen to Nicholas. I love him too. :( It's romantic that he's willing to sacrifice himself to help end her curse so that she could live a normal life and have a future, I just want him there too. Now I'm all anxious to see what happens. Can't wait for more!
KayleneH chapter 24 . 11/29/2011
Ohh...great chapter!
let.this.go chapter 24 . 11/29/2011
Great chapter! It's good to see Kieron and Estraya again.
sherrylynn chapter 24 . 11/29/2011
WOW what a way to end the chapter can,t wait for the next update
insomniac895 chapter 24 . 11/29/2011
o.m.g! no he can't do that ! what about gwen?
DNAstar chapter 24 . 11/29/2011
OMG whats going to happen? she finally said it yay, is her sister going to come? update soon please!
Nikte chapter 24 . 11/29/2011
A really great twist, never saw it coming. Great work as always :)
FlashFirePhoenix chapter 24 . 11/29/2011
First of all: awesome long chapter, it is greatly appreciated. D Now this is really out of place considering all the drama that's unfolded but was Kieron wearing his hood? Gwen wouldn't be affected by seeing his face because she's his spirit sister right? But Nicholas would...? I should probably join the masses in lamenting Nicholas' possible suicide but I really just can't see it happening. If it really goes down that way, I'll howl about it after the fact. Though what does Gwen do if he does sacrifice himself? Fly back to the Lycan pack with Avalon's Sanctuary and receive Mara's Blessing from Connor? Or do the Seers have it...? Isn't that a whole other adventure waiting to happen, haha. And those 3 questions were rhetorical I guess since they'll be answered in time. X) Well, see you next Monday. Hope you sleep well!

P.S. Leah and Gareth's chapter was cool too. They're moving faster than I expected but it makes sense since this isn't they're story. Guess they just have to develop quickly in a few chapters. Plus his last thought was totally sweet. Loved the whole "live in this moment" bit. )
mia aurora chapter 24 . 11/28/2011
Pleasee let this be a happy ending story T_T
Allimba chapter 24 . 11/28/2011
Awe-some chapter!
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