Reviews for The Edge of the Universe |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story! and i hope you update again. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the interaction between Amelia and Felix. Please post more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooh...don't leave us hanging too long. That's for the update today. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't figure him out. I just can't. WHAT does he want? And I'm curious (and scared) about where all these events will lead. I have a small feeling that either Amelia loses her life, or her sanity. Or...both. I guess we'll all see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this just gets darker and darker! So here's the thing: I don't see it as being realistic that the old lady would suspect anything just by hearing yelling and by hearing someone say "Fin is dead" - very circumstantial. At the same time, Fin could have had a heart attack...but I suppose in her state, Amelia wasn't really thinking straight, was she? Amelia paranoid much? :P Mayhaps. It's a tad unnerving to know that Felix has been watching her all that time. His motive is still a mystery...will we ever find out? It would be nice to know how he found her, why he's taken interest and what this ultimately means for Amelia. Will he forever be limited (and ironically powerful) within the mirror realm? Will only her reflection get attention? :P Anywho, I foretell this thing getting darker still... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that this has a dark theme - it makes it really intense. I hope you update soon, because you left us hanging there! :) ~Carm~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Felix. Haha! You've astounded me again with yet another superb chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heya again! I'm still reading! And it's really veryvery good! I feel almost scared to look in my bedroom mirror aha felix is a wonderful character, very strong willed. Well done :) Keep it up and it's on my alerts so I'll keep reading ! Kira x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this more and more as it develops...please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, I loved this chapter. Cute ending, too! And I love Felix! Can't wait for more :) ~Carm~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Before I write my compliment, let me just say that I am bewildered as to why this doesn't have more reviews! It is excellent, I live the voice in the mirror, and well done on creating a good mix of horror and mystery. You've got me asking questions, keep up the good work! Kira :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite an intriguing first chapter - you've definitely hooked me! Can't wait for more :) ~Carm~ |