nice beginning. i noticed that you have a few spelling mistakes, simple ones really, and a few minor grammar errors. i actually really like your story so far, keep up the good work.

-Waves-

I'm very happy that I managed to click this link. Not many stories in the Supernatural category are interesting, heck, half of them are about vampires.

I'm new to the whole fanfiction thing. I've read a couple stories, but most of just cheesy or... just not good. Refreshing to find a interesting non cheesy start to a story ;P