|Reviews for Room 51|
| GoneAway-MightNotBeReturning chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Um, this story is really, really different from the rest of your work, to be honest. Not that that's necessarily a good thing or a bad thing, but it's not at all romance based and more the sort of story that makes you kind of think. :D
That's a cool Lyra Belacqua reference. I wonder if people actually have cool last names like that?...
The ending line was really strong though. It implies a lot without saying anything outright.
| Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Based on your writing, I'm going to guess that English is your second language, and I suppose that would account for some of the wordiness and awkward phrasing here. On the whole, the English is good, but it definitely could use a little fixing.
As for the story itself, it's a bit clunky, but the concept is good. I found how your portrayed Dr. Novak's actions very realistic. I liked it a lot.