I liked the way Mark kept coming up with different possible stories behind the baby being there, because it was interesting to read, and kind of funny when he went off the extremely long tangent. :P

I liked the baby, because babies are so cute and adorable. xD I also liked the way Mark was so nice and gentle with the baby, because it's kinda like a different side of him.

Anyway, nice story! It was super-adorable! :)

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The ending disappointed me. Otherwise the plot and character are perfect.

Well done! Truly I believe your writing has developed and matured.

Everything seemed well paced and flowed smoothly. The characters seemed very real. It was almost as if you were writing about something you saw or were a part of - that's how natural it came across.

I'm finding it difficult to offer much of a critique, honestly. Partly because I'm out of the habit of really digging in, and partly because I don't believe there are really any glaring issues.

Thanks for sharing.

~Barbados