Reviews for The Last Bearers: Revised Edition |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well... things have just gotten a lot more... fucked up lol. Amazing chapter! I'm curious about how they'll go being in a three-way bond. Update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG...i just wrote a review to your first chapter instead of this one. I messed up, big time _ Well, please go check out the first chapter..my review for this chapter is posted there. PS; sorry for the complication, your my first Author I ever reviewed! Sorry _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love how this story is going. I almost cried... poor Daire. I have briefly tried to read over your old version of this story, but was afraid it would spoil the updated version. _ I am curious to know Halen's motives. Could you maybe explain them to me? I am so confused _ PS: I really enjoy your story KEEP IT UP! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() D: OHMYGOD. This chapter was amazing. Intense yet beautiful. As crazy as all the Bonding is, I'm glad no one has been left out. I can't wait to see what happens o.o |
![]() ![]() On pins and needles waiting for the next chapter esp. now that Daire and Aleksei are living together, hoping their love is going to take off for the moon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHMY! Awesome chapter C: I feel so bad for those three, but I'm hoping they see each other somehow sometime soon. Good luck with your writing c: |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a really great chapter c: I really liked all the additions. I wonder what'll happen now :c |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohmygod. I'd be so scared :/ I'm nervous /for/ him. I hope all goes well o.o |
![]() ![]() hey keep posting this ... it's pretty good. i read the first one, and i like how this one's a lil different story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.O WHAAA? Nh, I can't wait for the next chapter c: Awesome job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excuse my language, but Daire and the others Ah well,are utterly fucked. Ah well, I hope the Man's plans work :3 Update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's amazing how much this story has changed both writing style wise and in terms of the way the plot runs. This version is much more in depth and though I've read both the original here and on fanfiction I still find myself really interested in what happens next. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() This chapter was great...and you can make it as long as you want, we won't complain! After a week's wait, we get greedy haha. Can't wait for the next one. |
![]() ![]() This story is just so exciting and I am totally immersed in the lives of these wonderful people now it has become impossible to stop. Can't wait for the next chapter...thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! It's Daire's dad! I can't remember his name atm but it is it is it is! I knew he wasn't dead! Well...anyway, great chapter! I hope Caelyn survives :/ Please update soon! :D |