Reviews for Forbidden Sunlight
Carmel March chapter 8 . 6/6/2011
Great chapter! This just keeps getting better and better. Update soon!

uyghslzjdfknm chapter 7 . 6/5/2011
I really like this! Kuro and Nikko are really cute, I love how you've captured their relationship so well, and the way you described the Underworld is fascinating. Is this based on the story of Hades and Persephone?

One thing I would say is that just occasionally you use a phrase which sounds a little bit stilted, but that's a very easily solved problem. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Carmel March chapter 6 . 6/4/2011
The idea of this story is really great. I can't wait to see where you take it!

Make.Me.A.Sandwich chapter 4 . 6/2/2011
this is a cool story
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