Reviews for Panorama
Punslinger chapter 8 . 12/23/2012
I know that feeling well. Even sleeping pills won't
Punslinger chapter 7 . 12/23/2012
Well, you certainly put a sharp picture in readers'
minds, leaving each of us to draw our own conclusions.
J112011 chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
very interesting image

keep writing!
Punslinger chapter 6 . 8/3/2011
There is much deep meaning lurking here. There are a lot of people who should "never breathe," but we can't prevent them from doing it.
Punslinger chapter 5 . 7/29/2011
This one really gives me something to think about. Tear gas smells like apple blossoms, until it overcome the senses. In infantry training we had to inhale it to make us wary of the more lethal forms of chemical warfare. Now certain odors still remind me that even natural beauty and charm can conceal unexpected danger.
SmashedIce.X chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
I don't read many haikus, mainly because I don't like the fact that they're so short, but this really impressed me, great work! :)
Punslinger chapter 4 . 6/4/2011
This is my favorite so far. It presents many possibilities in so few well-chosen words.
Punslinger chapter 3 . 6/4/2011
Clever choice of metaphor to capture a moment of sad beauty.
Punslinger chapter 2 . 6/4/2011
I remember that feeling perfectly. Very nicely phased.
Sole-Reverie chapter 3 . 6/4/2011
The third one about the breadcrumbs is SO adorably delightful. I LOVED it! The other two are just as brilliant! Hope to read more. :)
bowl of strawberries chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
takes me right there!
Punslinger chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Very good. It strongly appeals to the senses with the unusual combination of tickled feet and decomposing odors.