OH MY GAWD BACCANO.

I think I love you.

(*raving Baccano fan.*)

Lovely oneshot thingie. I loved the character - usually I get annoyed by characters like this, but you pulled it off just right. He's a hitman and he thinks his job is boring... I'd think boring would be the last word to describe working as a hitman. Excellent description, I think you're the first person I've heard describe bodies as falling with a 'splurch'.

It did seem a little random, I guess. First there's just a guy and a hat, then an odd girl, then BOOM! assassination. But that kind of made it cool, and gave it an almost surreal air. I like that you kept the descriptions simple, also - flowery metaphors would just ruin this scene.

Great job. :)

This is very well-written; I like your style. I already adore the character .