Reviews for The Callous Man and His Cap |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GAWD BACCANO. I think I love you. (*raving Baccano fan.*) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely oneshot thingie. I loved the character - usually I get annoyed by characters like this, but you pulled it off just right. He's a hitman and he thinks his job is boring... I'd think boring would be the last word to describe working as a hitman. Excellent description, I think you're the first person I've heard describe bodies as falling with a 'splurch'. It did seem a little random, I guess. First there's just a guy and a hat, then an odd girl, then BOOM! assassination. But that kind of made it cool, and gave it an almost surreal air. I like that you kept the descriptions simple, also - flowery metaphors would just ruin this scene. Great job. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very well-written; I like your style. I already adore the character . |