Reviews for Foremost
AvoiDANCE chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Wow, from how I interpreted it, if correctly, I can relate this to someone. Is it about loving someone, but how much it hurt to love them, but the minute someone puts them down through lies, your guard goes up?
weareyourworstnightmare chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
like how you balanced love and pain while never losing expression of each. good job, keep writing.

-whisper
hipsters in paris chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
I liked the last line, it had a nice impact. Well done on that.

The rest of it wasn't too spectacular though - nothing really shone out to me. It just seemed very run of the mill stuff.

Keep writing. xx

-A Corner