Reviews for Want
JellicleJuggalo chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Great poem, I think you've somehow managed to get even better :D Don't give up!
darkershadeofpale chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
This style works really well.

I think I may have said that before.

The ... longing, and the pain comes through really well in your words.

It's pretty.

. darker shade of pale
Tender Lumplings chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
I love your poetry. It's so smooth and creative and beautiful. Also, thank you so much for the reviews. :D
weareyourworstnightmare chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
amazing as usual. i thought is was kinda short though. it doesn't matter thoe because i thought was still good and easy to understand. Keep it up

-whisper