|Reviews for Our Song|
| Dianna chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
Very well written.
| cab fed hig chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
"diving overboard without a life preserver" - i love how you extended the metaphor of his ocean eyes with this. it's beautiful and rare enough on fp.
"He was a walking ray of sunshine that rained upon me" - such interesting contrast by using 'raining' after describing him as sunshine.
i also like how throughout you use the guitar and playing it as a symbol of intimacy and love. - "we had to make music together", "we had each picked up our guitars and began our strumming", "every note we played together kept it alive". i know that the two were probably -actually- playing, but their relationship and their music has a distinct and brilliant connection.
the scene of throwing the seeds is so ethereal. and again, you use the trees growing as a symbol of their relationship. honestly, this is amazing.
"Someday, this song of ours will have words." wow. that gave me goosebumps.
this is very, very good.