Reviews for The Princess and The Dragon
RomanceObsessed chapter 7 . 11/30/2012
Honestly I would much rather you update this story instead of A Child's Playmate, especially since it is starting to get interesting. I really hope you update soon, I love this story so far. I do hope you find a way for Colleen to learn the language faster.
bloodlore chapter 7 . 11/30/2012
I like your idea about the whole priestess thing. Enjoying the story a whole bunch!
bloodlore chapter 6 . 11/30/2012
Awesome story. Only gonna give critique because its so good. The sentence "as music composers would pray for flitted in the air" took me a minute to understand. I thought for a sec composers were playing in the forest or something strange. Maybe it should be "as music THAT composers would pray". Second thing is when Mandora is being all crazy in the hot spring you write out her laughter as "bahaha". But I think you should just describe that "she laughed maniacally" or something. Obviously these two critiques don't actually matter that much and your story is really good the way it is! Just trying to be a helpful reviewer :)
Meeeesh chapter 7 . 11/30/2012
AHHHH! YOU UPDATED! I AM SO SO HAPPY!
I literally have checked for an update for this story every day; I am officially addicted to this story!
WOWIE! I though last chapter was flipping amazing (and it was,) but this one...I am speechless there are no words to describe how interesting, refreshing, informative, and (every positive word under the sun) it was! I love how we learned something about EVERYBODY. I had to lock myself in my room to read this chapter without being disturbed (you have created a monster in me!)
Anyway! I really like Colleen so far she has very realistic reactions and she is so brave! Definitely one of the best female protagonists I've seen in a while!
Qualz and Mandora are so sweet, and Honticus is still himself (which I love because I've really been warming up to him lately!) Idk how you do it, but you keep your characters true to who they are but open them up and make them more lovable!
OMG! We got to meet the child priestess, Kyein, Azusa, and Zelma all in the same chapter?! I feel like it's Christmas already!
Oh and I can't forget...VERA WANG! HAHAHAH! I cracked up so much when I read this!
So...Kyein sounds pretty complex/profound/hot...I hope he's the dragon and that maybe Colleen is the princess? Like I said, I don't know what to expect from this story (and I love that!)
Keep up the amazing fantabulous work, and I hope to be seeing another beautiful update soon. (;
Guest chapter 6 . 11/27/2012
Loved it, i want to know who the handsome stranger is!
mylittleprincess chapter 6 . 11/26/2012
update soon!
ninjaowl chapter 6 . 11/25/2012
MOST EXCELLENT! :D Ah that picture is so perfect for this story, slightly proud of myself for finding it :3 I am so, so, excited about next chapter! And you really do enjoy putting your characters through harsh turmoil :( Going through all that, and when she finally finds some relief in the form of a hot, naked, wet guy, he gets whisked away! If I didn't know better, I'd say you enjoyed doing this... :P
denmawarlight chapter 6 . 11/24/2012
okaaaay, weird man with death/hand/magic,...and still no dragon. grr, when where and how?
denmawarlight chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
I like it thus far, although where the dragon comes in I'm not sure of yet, still it would dearly please me if colleen was paired with the dragon...they could have a hatchling!
denmawarlight chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
well this is looking to be a nice story, although something majorly confuses me...you kept stating she was ill or poisoned or something to that extent, it made me want to ask...is COLLEEN the dragon, or is Lord Dmariti. Secondly, PALEEEEEAAAASE tell me your the one author on this site that is writing a dragon fic with the dragon NOT(I emasis the NOT) turning into a fricken human!?

I have read too many of those...
xxxreviewerxxx chapter 6 . 11/23/2012
I'm so glad you finally updated this story.
I love all of your stories, but this one is fabulous.
Everytime I read it, there's always something humorous in it which cracks me up for ages.

Please update soon.
Midnight113 chapter 6 . 11/23/2012
Awesome! Thanks for updating this, what a nice surprise to see this story in my inbox. And yes, I'm very excited about this mysterious man and hope he brings some lovely extra drama to the scene. Keep up the amazing work!
FantasyReader15 chapter 6 . 11/23/2012
UPDATES! YAYYY. I'm happy. :)
Reread everything. Hohoho.
So, this white man.
Is he the dragon? The figure/representation of the 'death'? Deathgod? White hair? Seems about right.
Did Honticus' eyes change from obsidian to green, or were you referring to Qualz?
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I get lost with eye color easily because they keep changing. :P

If anything, I hope that Honticus gets to know Colleen better (in the future of course!) and help her/defend her moree. They seem like a good couple, but I rather have him act like a brother/uncle/father(?) and Qualz a father/second father!? (chemistry is nice). Mandora can be the sister and the dragon (or whoever it is)... :D Can be something else.

Mandora and Honticus? Eh... Maybe. No. :P Honticus stays singlee until 20 chapters later first and doesn't get laid (hopefully).

Tough love with Thelia - At least she cares! A possible mother

So, you say you ran out of fantasy stories and will only update at that point? I understand. Time to deprive you of Fantasy genres to fix this problem and make you update this story more frequently. :P
Don't blame mee, you haven't updated this story in a while and I was getting bored to death.

Happy Thanksgiving!
sappyromancelvr chapter 6 . 11/22/2012
Glad to see another chapter! :)
Greeneyes616 chapter 6 . 11/22/2012
I can't wait until you post more of this! Keep up the great work.
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