|Reviews for For Who I Am Inside|
| weareyourworstnightmare chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
Amazing!i really liked the sybolism! i hope your not the type to get mad over constructive critizim. i really liked the way you conveyed your idea but i suggust trying more complex rhyme schemes and working on diffrent rhyming words. my suggustion would be to keep sticky notes with you and when ever you find a word you like write it down then stick the notes on your desk or wherever you write and look at it when your looking for a rhyme. using two words that obviously rhyme is not as fun as say using longer rhymes that rhyme but arnt obvious your a good writer. both whisper and i think so. i look forward to seeing you inmprove. - miku
| Xadon chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
I like this song.
| weareyourworstnightmare chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
dude, good job! i love the vibe this song sets off and beleive me when i say that id but this song. beleive thats alot coming from me because im Very picky about my music. i no its crazy, sue me.
keep on rockin
| MikaZuki- Angel Of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
this is really good. -