|Reviews for Contentment|
| nickyO chapter 1 . 7/2/2011
The ellipse (that's the technical name for ..., right?) works perfectly at the end by inviting the reader to imagine this long ago peaceful scene and then connect it to the writers present emotional state.
| bowl of strawberries chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
mmm, i got a feeling of being connected to something ancient. does that make any sense? haha! great job.