Reviews for Why Tred Blindly
P.M.Hall chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
I understand and appreciate what you are saying about engaging your entire Brain when you are doing anything. However what you said was too general, its all been said before. Another thing was you misspelled a lot of words, such as Tread in the title. Go through your essay. and edit it to get rid of as much of the spelling and grammar errors as possible, then expand it. I know its difficult, but try to make it more interesting. On a positive note for your essay, I completely agree with you about what you said about tradition. Some traditions are really so outdated that they don't mean anything to the people observing them, that's when they should be dumped. I also like what you said about parties and celebrations, I don't really get them either. They are fun to go to, but after an hour or so, I'm bored