Reviews for Trickling Light
electrical moon chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Lovely poem! I like the progression of it, from fear to finding land, and the recurring imagery of sunlight and illusions.
Phibonacci chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
I love the personalization of words, Reason, Emotion, etc. I enjoyed the effect it adds to the poem.

"Hope is being brandished like a flag," - I love this line.

Fantastic job, keep it up!