|Reviews for Trickling Light|
| electrical moon chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Lovely poem! I like the progression of it, from fear to finding land, and the recurring imagery of sunlight and illusions.
| Phibonacci chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
I love the personalization of words, Reason, Emotion, etc. I enjoyed the effect it adds to the poem.
"Hope is being brandished like a flag," - I love this line.
Fantastic job, keep it up!