Reviews for She Loved Red Better
bloodandroses16 chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
I have a horror story somewhat like this. Blood Red. Very amazing.
Lia Jenson chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
The repitition almost got tiring, but at least it didn't lose it's effectiveness. You made it creepy and disturbing as well as actually allowing for some good characterization. Not easy with so few lines. Good job. :)
Souffle Girl chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Ooh, very creepy! I like the repetition of 'she hated white, she loved red better'. It gave the whole piece an almost poetic feel. However, what you need to watch out for is sentence structure. In this piece the majority of the sentences have the same structures, and that can bore a reader, no matter how disturbing the content is. If you vary the sentences some more, this piece could be even better!

Good work!

-beaux reves, courtesy of the Review Marathon (link on my profile).
MakeshiftRose chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Good story. And I love the repetition the most. And I agree with her - White is a horrible colour.